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About Me Member Emotional Poet SilencesKnife16/Female/Canada Recent Activity Deviant for 6 Years
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chained

Thu Jun 24, 2004, 1:12 PM
bound to this man
whom i do not crave
no lust, no passion
dry...love has forsaken
the oasis of my heart

standing in the shower
hot cascades of fire
running over me
while my mouth stretches
and contorts in agony
hotter and hotter
scalding rivulets of liquid pain
feeling...just feeling

silently i cry
for release
from my chains
for a butterfly life
skimming the surface,
as superficial as possible

how far gone am i?
to wish to be
superficial?

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  • Current Residence: kittensville
  • Interests: hmmm?
  • Favourite movie: Four Seasons
  • Favourite band or musician: Avilla
  • Favourite genre of music: ummm?
  • Favourite artist: Rebecca E.
  • Favourite poet or writer: Sara C.
  • Favourite photographer: Andrew>bday card ;)
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  • Favourite game: Kilo de Merde (bamfield)
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  • Favourite cartoon character: Garfield...i have a weakness for laziness in felines...
  • Personal Quote: "Intelligence is like a river, the deeper it is the less noise it makes"
  • Tools of the Trade: ummm paper and a pen?

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:iconctenophore:
wow, first comment, I'm honored. By the way thanks for commenting back on my comment, really appreciated...you seem to be in touch with silence (just a hunch)

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"Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion..."

"Harmony with land is like harmony with a friend; you cannot cherish his right hand and chop off his left. That is to say, you cannot love game and hate predators. ...The land is one organism."
:iconsilencesknife:
sorry for not replying back earlier..have been spreading the Christmas cheer...kinda... again thank you for your comment as i didn't think anyone would actually bother..my poems aren't anything special...anyway i'm going go celebrate my bday! i'm finally 16..so embrassing to be in gr11 and still not 16..but i am now...:airborne:
:iconctenophore:
no problem, it really didn't matter to me that you didn't reply, but thanks for the comments, those do matter.

--
"Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion..."

"Harmony with land is like harmony with a friend; you cannot cherish his right hand and chop off his left. That is to say, you cannot love game and hate predators. ...The land is one organism."

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